1st draft of script

INT. BARRYS BED ROOM. DAY

Barry is browsing Facebook looking through young girls profiles for his next victim. Whilst drinking a cup of coffee and eating breakfast. The bedroom is messy, he is unemployed and living off his mum. Everything looks dull to show he doesn't do much with his life.

BARRY: VOICEOVER

Finding them is always so easy. There's so many to choose from.

Tall. Short. Fat. Slim. They're just so flattered by my attention.

INT. VANESSA'S BEDROOM. DAY

Vanessa talking to her friends over Facebook chat whilst doing homework and listening to music. The sound of the Facebook add comes up. She looks through the pictures of a teenage boy. She appears to look quite interested and decides to accept.

BARRY: VOICEOVER 

They always seem to accept though. These social networking

sites make it so easy for people like me (mocking society).

The process usually only takes me a few months (cocky tone).

EXT. VANESSA'S SCHOOL. DAY

Vanessa's busy texting her new found friend, smiling to herself as they text.

RACHAEL:

Your always on the phone!

VANESSA:

His asked me to meet him. Smiling to herself.

Vanessa's friends ignore her. They look sick and tired of having to hear about 'Thomas'

EXT. PARK. AFTERNOON

Vanessa's sitting on a bench in the park waiting, a shadow is filmed lurking around in the background. It cuts to a figure of a big, tall girl watching her.

BARRY VOICEOVER:

I love watching them wait.

Barry watches Vanessa from an alley across the road and slowly starts to walk over to vanessa. There is a lot of tension. Scene then cuts to Vanessa's cardigan on the floor by the bench.

INT. BARRY'S BEDROOM. DAY

Barry is back on Facebook, drinking his coffee and having his toast.

BARRY:VOICEOVER

I always get away with it. It's so simple.

Voice from radio in the background:

Police are still concerned for the whereabouce of the 14 year

old girl Vanessa Sparks who dissapeared after meeting a person

she befriended online via a social networking site.

Barry turns off the radio and signs into Facebook continuing to look at young girls profiles.

*Slogan - "Be careful. People aren't always what they seem"